tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760933790208866014.post5509681553442596205..comments2009-04-24T14:12:21.222-07:00Comments on Brian's Blog: Short and Sweet BroadcastBrian Hradskyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05427876167284477111noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760933790208866014.post-21760138647445542962009-04-21T11:59:00.000-07:002009-04-21T11:59:00.000-07:00Brian,
Both of these are too short, under 60 words...Brian,<br />Both of these are too short, under 60 words. Go for 80. <br /><br />Remember to stay in present tense. The fire chief story starts in past tense (Clough died). Good job of using short sentences.<br /><br />In the Virginia Tech story, you do start with present tense. But think of what's happening NOW: perhaps start with "Students are remembering their classmates..." <br />Spell out numbers the way the anchor would speak them.Sheri Venemahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11117021698696644553noreply@blogger.com